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Sadistic Moments For The Unfeeling Heart

Blood colored walls
Matching my blood stained clothes
I never told you this wouldn't hurt

Broken and lying on the floor
All you can do is stare at me in your stupor
Bet you never thought I'd actually go through with it

Your breath gets shallow
Your heart rate slows
Death finds those who provoke it

Your chest ripped open
Exposing your heart
The one that made me this way

Smiles form on my face
Soon to disappear at the sound of your laughter
My heart clenches from the familiar tone

You smile my way
Telling me to beware and hold close to my senses
Though mine have already gone

"Fuck you"
Your two last words
Ringing through my brain

Your heart stops beating
Your smile forever placed on your face
As your voice resounds in my mind,
Driving me insane

You always did have to have the last laugh
But let me tell you my dear
Your body was the best i've ever mutilated.
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And I still love you
<3

Author notes

lol random words put together to form a death love scene... ever so romantic
(quickly written)

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  • Injury
    November 4
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    Wooowwwiiii deliciously mortifying write Keep it up now

  • not bad at all, i enjoyed reading this poem, quite interesting!!!