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The Break up

These falling tears are hot on my cheeks
strange considering I'm so cold
why did you tear my heart out
what pain did i cause you to get this as a return

I loved you and you showed me the door
what would you think..if i called you a whore

You treat me like meat when i gave you my heart
no matter what this is what it feels like
when my heart is torn

Author notes

Umm i was given a prompt and this is what i gave back.

 

This is the prompt

 

These falling tears are hot on my cheeks
strange considering I'm so cold

what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it

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  • white rose wolf

    i loved reading this it's very sad and i'm sorry if this guy is hurting so bad good wirte

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 3

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    wow...

    .... you made so much starting with so little, I liked the read and would like to think no one is so insensitive as to hurt you like that but I am also a realist and know that I too was once that insensitive!


    • Jasmine Minx
      November 3
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      This wasnt about me. This was more about the guy that i wrote this with.