You're like an insect crawling between my thighs,
hiding shit behind your eyes,
and smile,
with that feverish grin,
ain't no good,
with your tongue of sin.
Hey,
don't look to me,
trying to pretend you're better than me,
looking around like there's something to see,
always asking for unrealistic pity.
you've gotta grudge for the world,
and a hand full of maggots,
guess you didn't know,
you fucked with the wrong faggot.
I wish you well,
I really do,
but If you step to me,
I'll break you boo.
No,
I don't understand,
call me ignorant,
but you can't stand,
on your own two feet,
you just six foot meat,
with no brain to speak of.
A contest entry
- Liar by Vampress Alayna.
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Comments
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This is AMAZING!!!!!!! Very powerful.
"you've gotta grudge for the world,
and a hand full of maggots,
guess you didn't know,
you fucked with the wrong faggot."
My fave part of the piece. Love the forcefulness behind your words. I really enjoyed this. And I loved the line breaks, wonderfully put together.
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Damn!!
NICE WORK!
-V.A.S.H
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