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Flame

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I walked in the door, and felt something begin to awaken.
You sat so far away, but I wanted to be taken.
With each inch we moved closer, it felt like a cruel game.
I thought the night would end, and I’d burst in to flame.


I finally couldn’t stand the churning,
I had to show you I was burning.


Every touch made me want more.
You anticipated my every desire,
Yet I never knew what you had in store.
Every touch seemed to take me higher.

Your fingers seemed to scorch my skin,
But the true fire began to burn within.
I wanted to be filled and surrounded,
Nothing could have kept me grounded.
Your release, sweet to me as my own,
But now the seeds of passion are sown.

I awoke with my lips swollen and red.
My secrets are bruised, but it feels so good.
Memories still floating unexpected in my head,
Again please, if we could.

I steel feel the warmth, the fire isn’t out,
I hope you want me again, because I can’t do without.
My secrets still yearn for that touch of your hand,
I want to return it any way that I can.
I hope you feel the heat rising in you,
Needing my flames to scorch your skin, too.

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  • oneheartstring
    November 4

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    enjoyed

    Your submission captures an intoxication with your partner. well said in rhyme. good luck in the contest


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 3

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    This was too hot babe I loved it. If anyone deserves to have a flaming touch its you. This was so good and I loved the last stanza in it. I wish you luck in the contest SH


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 3

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    Flaming hot..the burning yearning from within flows from this passionate piece..there is a poignant twist which is dark yet very effective..there is still a buring love and lust.." Needing my flames to scorch your skin, too"..awesome ending..brilliant penning honey..
    Much love....David

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 3

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    Wow....

    .... this one got me going even and I am not the type to get into these types of poems. I burn within as well now.

    • ubercrazygirl gold member
      November 3
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      heh I have ice cream to share now And I'm so glad that you like it thank you

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