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Me and My Old Guitar

I知 just a poor kid with an old guitar
Always playing for the wind and sky
Dreaming to perform among the stars.

I知 just a poor kid with a burning passion
I write my songs and ignore my poverty
I have my music but I have no property.

I知 just a poor kid with rhyme and rhythm
I give this life a novel version
I record my music in my heart and memory.

I知 just a poor kid with an old guitar
Starting to play in bars and music houses
Dreaming to perform for more audiences.

I知 just a poor kid with a burning passion
Playing feverishly, chasing my destiny
A soldier of fortune in the music industry.

I知 just a poor kid with rhyme and rhythm
A new discovery of a famous agency
I start to play and rock the city.

I知 just a poor kid with an old guitar
But I致e been everywhere, I致e gone so far
Chasing my dream to be a star.

I知 no longer a poor kid with an old guitar
I致e bought a new one, I even got a car
This soldier of fortune has won the war.

I知 a far-famed kid but I致e kept my old guitar
Secretly playing for the wind and sky
A star performing for the brighter stars.

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Picture Credit: http://thesoulmirror.deviantart.com/art/Soldier-of-Fortune-125720247


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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 16
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    Thank You for Your Entry ~


    the repetition works well in this piece I think; you open up a realistic view of musicians and how most start their lives and careers without being overly in-your-face

    best of luck