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of a past feeling now saciated

sometimes the
uncetainty preceding
the fall of our skin
runs swiftly on its way
to a twilight won't
the falling come at
once? the melting is painful
as the burning (burning) me yearns
for a shared breath

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  • decode
    November 3
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    beautiful. & I adore the last line.