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Hold You

Everyday I think about you
wondering what you've been up to.
As I sit in my room
I find myself wishing
you were here with me.
I want hold you and never let go. I want you to know
that I love you true,
and I'll stay by you.
Love isn't easy to find
and sometimes harder to keep,
but my fears disappear when I'm with you.
I want to hold you
keep you close to me,
while pretending time doesn't exisits.
Can I hold you forever?

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  • quietwriter87
    November 22
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    awsome

    i can def. relate to this, i used to feel like that all the time. it's a great piece of work. i like how you express yourself. i know what it's like to not live together. good luck to you guys!!!


  • ButILoveHer silver member
    November 13

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    " love isn't easy to find and sometimes harder to keep" this is so true
    I love this soft romantic write

    keep it up ^_^


    • Borntowriteforever
      November 13
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      thank you. i will always be writing, for she helps to bring words I cannot speak nor find.


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    November 5

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    ^_^ cuteness! Again i feel the same way bout my special gal. Love is grand aint it??


    • Borntowriteforever
      November 13
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      love is grand. before I believed I didnt deserve love. now that I have her, i know it isnt so.


  • nicolesbaby
    November 4
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    yes baby u can hold me forever


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    November 4

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    Awe this is really Sweet and Beautiful she is a lucky girl . Good luck and keep on writing your word useage was amazing here. This flowed really well. Your talented indeed Searra

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