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You glow

I saw you today,
As I see you everyday.
You looked depressed,
But I can see your spirit,
And It glows.

There are times where there
Are the times of the best,
Where you heart and soul shine to the world.
And there are times where you upset or hurt,
But you still shine, but only to where the closest can see.

You kind when you're upset,
You shine bright when you're happy.
Who knows, but maybe you shine brightest of them all.
So glimmer to the world with your soul.

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  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 3

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    This was so cool. I really enjoyed this, you put a lot into this I can tell. SH