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Fly on The Wall

I look at the ceiling,
and i see it,
and I'm sure that it sees me,
i could kill it any time i wanted to,
or i could leave it be,
its mine and it knows it,
i think ill play god,
i think ill kill it,
i do and it feels great,
i want to bring it back so i can do it again,
i want to say hi to my little friend,
look into my madness,
what do you see,
that little fly brought out the evil in me.

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  • tidoubleguher
    November 3

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    Okay, so this made me think of this story of this high school teacher caught a fly and killed it, then said to any student who ate it, hed get an A on the test that day and the kid ate it and got an A Anyway, side story over. This was a good poem, great imagery in the beginnign!