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A second Chance in Fire

Fire! Fire! its burning
Leaving nothing but ashes
New life forms again

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  • Shantti silver member
    November 19
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    OMG I see it now. I'm sorry, I was reading fire like two syllables. My apologies.


  • Shantti silver member
    November 18

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    This reminds me of the annual forest fires they have on the west coast each summer. New life always forms again anyway though.
    If I'm not mistaken though your lines read 7-7-5.
    Beautiful though, thank you for entering