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Autumn Rain

Touch me again,
Wind,
Let me feel strangers' memories.

In the silence
Of this downpour-

Break my timepiece
And I'll exhale wonder.

Are you jealous, moon,
That I have this
Reverie?

While you must float on
  above,
Detached?

Close my eyes-
I'll send you a summary.

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