Deep black holes in her big brown eyes,
Luring me in just like the black holes far out in space and skies.
Sucking me in and tearing me apart, bone by bone, joint by joint,
Crushed to the end, to the very last point.
The hand that I've held a million times before,
Was pulling me in so that I would explore.
However, it suddenly let go, and I was out of the black hole,
But, I was stranded in space forever, just my soul.
The arms that used to wrap around me,
Are no longer in my sight, can't you see?
The lips that I used to dream of and stare,
Ate me up without a care.
The back that used my body to rest,
Fell right through me to hit the ground; all is a mess.
Last but certainly not least, the eyes, arms, back, made up the body that I once held,
Are now far away, as I lay here all torn apart, thinking what caused me to repel.
Why couldn't I have just fallen into the hole and die,
Now I'm just hopeless, struggling to cry.
If I had tears they would be flowing down my face,
But they as well were torn up in the hole's base.
What do you guys think?
Comments
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I thought that this was a sad write. The emotions were very intense and you demonstrated your ability to express these strong emotions very well. Great job! I hope that you can use these intense feelings to continue your great writes.
