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on distance.

Today, we are painfully human;
soft clusters of earth-bound atom and
memory that knows little of existence.

Space is denser here,
chasing sunrise over shrouded mountains
and coarse, red earth.

Faith travels faster than any promise of remembrance,
clinging to windswept coastline and finding home
in the warm creases of your palm.




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i have an friend in cape town SA that i have never had the pleasure of setting eyes on as of yet. continents apart, i still have hope that we will have the opportunity to meet in person one day.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 20
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    So do I. Her name is Nicolette and she is one of AP's finest and most popular writers, as well as being a beautiful soul. This is a lovely poem with elegant metaphors strewn throughout. Congratulations on your HM, Poet.



  • larkbird
    November 20
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    This is a really great poem. I can relate to it really well. Distence seems to be just about the only thing that I'm really good at. Good job and God Bless

  • Just4u
    November 16
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    Life is a series of twists and turns and we never know where we
    will end up, until we are there...


  • Ditt0
    November 14
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    Aw