Suicide
Purified
death is welcoming me
See the eyes of time
the sand has run out
no more time to master
class is done
ready or not
I'm coming for you
See your impurities
death, destruction
Impunity
Pride
excessive belief,
did you really think
you could replace me
Envy
desire beyond belief
never have enough to fill your needs
Gluttony
consume the planet
there's no need for diversity
Lust
crave the sexual beast
carnal knowledge to the 10th degree
Anger
refuse love
seed rage and wrath in all you see
Greed
covet that which you will never need
no end in site, engulf the world
Sloth
sitting on your behind
seems the body is devoid of spirituality
See the eyes of time
the sand has run out
no more time to master
class is done
ready or not
I'm coming for you
Suicide
Purified
death is welcoming me
Author notes
a w a n n a b e p o e t -
Seems like today was a morbid kind of day so I closed it out on the seven deadly sins.
Please tell me what you think offer some advice on how to make it just that much better
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Remember what you told me, never do it.
Suicide is the easy way out plus would you want to go to hell for doing it?
NOPE.
I love this poem and how you describe time running out.
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I will never do that, it is just the wrong way out.
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wow this is awesome hun you have penned this so deep I love the style.. I know one thing in my heart you would never do this.. for you would kill all who love you so dearly.. love your pen.. I want smiles from you dear soul hugs always Angel♥♥
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I would never do it, I could not find that kind of cowardice or courage whichever way some people look at it.
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back to my commenting marathon hehe
oohhhh I hope you stay away from this monster hehe
I don't believe you'd ever go down his nasty path
I love the fact that you put in the seven sins one by one AWESOME ...
A morbid day?? why be this??
xx DD
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Its just one of those days, I guess I have them from time to time.
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very nice, seven deadly sins, to me this is very dante-eque. proably b.c i just read the piece. yu pyup
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well thank you sweetie, I am going to bed. I need to rest its been a long long long day for me.
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