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I need bug spray!

You dodge my questions like a fly with the swatter
Start sentences that you don’t finish, buzzing around my head

Where the fuck is the bug spray?

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I know.... I have a horrible sense of humor!

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  • John BoSox
    November 4
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    Wow...


    • findingurself.less gold member
      November 4
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      Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate it when people start to say something and then change their mind!! So agitating!