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J'avoue

Je confesse à moi-même et de vous

Je suis désolé pour mon erreurs
Je maltraités vous, je vous avais mal compris
Mais vous éntreindrez moi
Parce que tu m'aimes

Croyez-vous je rêve
Pour l'aimez et la vie
Avec toi, et toi seul?

Ça n’a pas d’importance si vous crouyez
On sera suffisant si vous aimez moi

Je sens culpabilité
Pour la douleur
Parce que j'ai douté de toi

Mais je l'avoue aujourd'hui, en français pour vous
Je ne serais rien
Sans vous

Ainsi, j'attends
Patiemment, sans question
A tenîtes encore
Parce que je t'aime, et je t'aimerai toujours



I confess to myself and to you

I am sorry for my mistakes
I mistreated you, I misunderstood you
But you accepted me
Because you love me

Do you believe I dream
For a love and a life
With you, and you alone?

It doesn't matter if you believe
It will be enough if you love me

I feel guilt
For the pain
Because I doubted you

But I confess today, in French for you
I would be nothing
Without you

So, I wait
Patiently, without question
Until you hold me again
Because I love you, and will love you always

Author notes

Written on 4th November 2009 at 03:10 GMT

I spent a couple of hours doing this in French and English! I wrote this for Dan in French because we are Morticia and Gomez, and he loves when I speak French to him. This is out of my comfort zone because, one, I don't usually write poetry in other languages (lol), and two, I have difficulty seeing what's really there and this helped me to look closer.

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  • Aaah! Girl! I am sure you know I love this! I always love your writing! But this is truly awesome!! I absolutely love it!! My bookmark area is slowly filling with your work!! Keep it up chick and never put down that pen!!