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Broken v.2 (10-14-09)

Angel whose wings were once broke and withered
some holes have healed, some things recovered
scars up under that won't be seen

Learned to live again to be herself
no disregard to the things she do
reprecussions and consequences taken happily

Learned even though she fell hard and fast
and before her time
She can make the best
of that dreadful fall

Now she's able once again
to fly high as she once did

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