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Try
and fly,
to my world.
Candy land swirls,
l o l l i p o p s, and toys
sugarcane girls and boys.
Clouds of pink cotton candy
b u b b l e g u m flavors all d a n d y.
Marshmallow treats, big chocolate bunnies
and teddy bears all dripping with honey.
With purple and pink, and silvery bows
new babies float by counting their toes.
Peek-a-boo and hide- and -go-seek
games just for you, do not peek.
There are liquorish ropes
to tie up your hopes.
Wishes a must
fairy dust.
So fly
try
~
~
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Written April 14th, 2004
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A diamond write
to light the night
and the picture -pure delight.
Good luck in the contest. -
This made me want to eat candy.. and reminded me of candy land. I do like it, thank you for entering my contest.
PLUR -
Love the picture did you draw that, you have alot of talent great job on the write. Good luck in the contest worthy competitor. BTW love the shape of the poem too
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Very adorable.
Sounds wonderful.
Haven't flown in years.
It is good to see that Peter Pan
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Great shape poem. It was really cute, also. Great flow and rhyme. The ending was adorable. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up.
~Miranda -
GREAT JOB ..........
great job ... this is so cute
and you did a very good job
so keep up the good work -
Hi there,
This was a fantastic piece, of work, I really enjoyed it all the best.
Blue moon
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This was really neat! I love the shape too.And the picture! Good luck in the contest!
Tammy33
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very cool
This is great. I love how you made a shape and the picture really adds to it. Very cool.
Queen
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