Feel the insecurity
eating me from the inside
monsters coming from behind
demons to the front and sides
seems a destiny
to run and hide.
Destroyer
do as you please
Killing by degress
an unholy fantasy
shooting indiscrimenatly
leave nothing alive
this gun is the cure
for mankind's disease.
There is no remedy
no remorse
im hoarse
get on your knees
and bleed
there's no need to plead.
Your on the cooling board
life's gonna leave you cold
cut open from head to knave
coroner's blade if you please
life's run out.
Destroyer
cutting you down.
Killing by degress
a unholy fantasy
shooting indiscrimenatly
leave nothing alive
this gun is the cure
for mankind's disease
Author notes
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Lyrics for a metal tune I am fiddling with.
http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=126072
Please tell me what you think offer some advice on how to make it just that much better
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When it gets to "on the cooling board"
That should be a bridge, it would sound really good -
Wow, once again my dear uncle I could make this into a song, and once I get my camera working I will, but I will try to record on my webcam
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that is so sweet Emily, I would love to hear that.
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Life's gonna leave you cold-- agghhhh I've just beaten the depression meh!!
darn Angelo you been on a black day today haha xx DD
Great work though.. i felt the darkness throughout this
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'shoting' shooting? other than that i really adore this poem. it is interstng and fresh, what's going on though? what's with all the morbid poems lately. if you want to talk you know where to find me.
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Hi, just hit a downer today feeling kind of down in the blue dumpster, except today it is more like metal oh well.
Tomorrow will be another day.
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