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Lucky Star

Lucky star, 
She shoots far and wide
into the hearts of many
floating on cloud nine
as always

Eyes wandering to the stars
filled with sparkling dreams
Just waiting to soar
stretching her elegant wings
and smiling absently
Lighting up
Thousands of suns
Leaving the angels speechless
with her untainted grace
her pure heart of gold
Filled with compassion
and love so tender
with courage of the highest order

Oh, children of the world
sing in harmony
of what beauty, grace or soul
such as this?

She conducts
this musical sound
of sweet harmony
leading children of the land, waters and skies
young or old
dark or light
reaching across oceans
bridging gaps
dancing across the stars
touching the moon
of glimmering dreams

Wisdom in her eyes
at a age so young
Peacemaker of the blue planet
The wished upon
lucky star
Is
She

Author notes

now how. this is a verry good one. but i can't help but feel as if we got off track. This one was helped by everlasting ellen. I cannot take all the credit for this masterpiece.

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  • MizzConstrued
    November 28
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    Some people really do touch our lives, leaving trails of sparks, that your poem defines perfectly. Well done


    • SmileEnjoy
      November 28
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      Yup they sure do, i have encountered many of those people. Thanks. XD


  • sgking123 gold member
    November 26
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    wow

    she indeed seems to be a lucky start spreading all those lights and toucjhing all those lives.....this poem ahda terrific message and guess I did like it quitea bit..thanks for sharing