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Hot Air Balloon

HOT AIR BALLOON

Hot air balloon how colorful you are
Oh how beautiful
Take a flight

Air born delight
Into the sky so high
rising on high


balloon of beauty
a wonder is the sights
long journeys ahead
lovely it is
oh how glorious
over head glides
no end to the delight













Allen Hollandsworth
©11/3/09

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Did for school time Preschool Word Of The Day

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  • Debra A Baugh gold member
    November 3

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    what was the word of the day....is it possible to start adding what the word of the day is with your AN?......if, you don't mind I would like to write something around the word of the day for the preschool.....I like this write is it okay if, I write something using Hot Air Balloon in my title

    • I did use the write about the word
      i will start putting the word in AN sorry keep forgetting to do that


  • Little Lesley
    November 3
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    This is VERY good, Wander.
    Miss. Snow


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 3

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    Yay...This is my favorite and your best acrostic yet! Keep penning, Allan! Mom

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