I'm smiling on the outside
But dying on the inside
Writhing in agony
I can't catch my breath!
There's a million pound weight
Sitting on top of my chest
I can't hear anything else
Over my screaming thoughts.
Every since You've been gone
I've waited for your return.
Then I open my eyes
And remember you're not coming back.
There's a million pound weight
Sitting on top of my chest
I can't hear anything else
Over my screaming thoughts.
I'm smiling on the outside
And crying on the inside
Bottling up these emotions
Too afraid to let them out...
There's a million pound weight
Sitting on top of my chest
I can't hear anything else
Over my screaming thoughts.
I still look for you
Thinking you're here
But I need to realize
That you've died...
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I think this is about all I got lol. What do you think?
Please tell me what you think
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Every since You've been gone
I've waited for your return.
Then I open my eyes
And remember you're not coming back.
This is my favorite part and this is just wonderfully written, fantastic job!
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Thank you so very much for your comment
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this is sooo good lol .. it reminds me of like a song its soo good lol i'm gona have it in my head all night
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thanks This actually is a song that I wrote. I'm glad you like it.
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I think you've an excellent outlet for those emotions with your poetry. I love reading the works of others and feeling the emotions that they are going through.
An excellent write...it doesn't rhyme(neither does most of mine) but it flows nicely.
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Thank you
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I enjoyed this, totally relatable something we all can feel. i like how it almost comes across as a song, i wouldnt mind if there was more, why they arent coming back
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Well, it is about my grandfather who died a couple years ago... I still miss him like crazy! BUt he's in a better place... Thanks for the comment though
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this is really good!!!!!!
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thank you so much!
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you're welcome
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