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Dream Lover

My Dream Lover

His breath

The breeze of the ocean beneath my window

His hands

The tangled, silken sheets

portraying my most wicked of fantasies

His eyes

The silver of the moon

And his hair

The oppressive darkness sliding...caressing

My Dream Lover

A man with the makings of reality

Made of substances that exist in my little mind-induced cove

The time for the sun is never a wanted but always a needed

For if the sun never came up

The longing that makes my moments with him so enticing, so fulfilling

will never be there for me to share with

My Dream Lover

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