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Under Your Spell

This crazy feeling

This...sexual healing

The fire kindling

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This love I'm feeling

This crazy urge

Soon our bodies will merge

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I was waiting for it

The pain, the pleasure

Your fangs cutting through the leather

I try to hold myself together

But its too late

I'm all the way under

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  • XMysticalNightmareX
    November 3

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    wow really well done, short and sweet. you are very talented! I really enjoyed reading this piece!! keep it up!!