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Tragic Queen (Acrostic)

T oday was the day we were to be married

R ight here in our own backyard

A fter sunset when the night was young

G uess you thought it was a game

I nterrupting our service with your drunken slur

C an a wife kill her husband without remorse?



Q uiet as a cat did I sneak to your room

U nity means nothing to me now

E ver so slightly did I lift the knife

E verywhere there was blood

N othing felt as good as that

What did you think

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  • creepy...another great poem. you are a great writer!


    • Tragic-Queen
      November 4
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      Thanx!

      Thank you soo much for the comments...Usually people are like freaked out because my poems are well like you said it...Creepy!

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