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She's All I Want

I see her

She's as beautiful as I remember

Long flowing hair that falls in timbers

I wonder if she knows I'm watching

What if she turns around---Oh god I have to hide

She walks with an elegant grace

I love the dimple in her right cheek

She looks so innocent but down deep shes as spicy as the other girls I meet

I wonder what she'd say if I asked her out?

I'll never know if I don't try....right?

I tap her shoulder with my trembling fingers

She turns around with a smile

And says "I was wondering when you was going to ask!"

Author notes

One of more happier one..probably the only one

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