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Tears fall down on a terror-stricken face
A little girl crying for her mother's embrace
The mother mouthing "Stay in your hiding place"
The little girl does as she's told but then grabs for the mace
But it is way too late
For her mother lay dead but the stranger stays

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Usually my poems are short and to the point...

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