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Life and Love

I look at life and love like a puzzel
One that you can never solve
They walk hand in hand
Causing you so much joy and pain

I find myself writing this as i try to figure myself out
Trying to makes heads or tales of what life and love really are
Life and love it seems
Has stumpped me again
What you see and what i really am has caused this problem
One that seems to linger around me like a noxius gas

I've created so many walls
That no one can possible knock then all down
The walls creat invisible boundries
That kill the chances of love and restrict my choices in life.

At times i wish they would just fall down
Cave in on theirselves and let me drown in the emotions that's dammed up

I just want to let loose one time
and see what happens.
I Just want to have fun and not care about all the problems that riddle my life (wheather thoes problems be mine or my friends)
I just wish that this puzzel could be solved once and for all.

Author notes

Not my best. I feel as if it was a little forced to get this much emotion out of me right now but it works i guess.

~Kathryn

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  • Darkmoon
    November 4

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    it was good KP. Well all i could say is life is the way it is and the only way to let the walls fall is, well for once i don't really know what to say. The way mine fell was with Codi's help, he let me be myself. Try that find someone you trust and let yourself free. Well that's all i've got.?.. I'm sorry normally I'm better then this but i suppose it's just cause I'm upset... Keep up the good work.

    ~Edna~


    • purplemoon
      November 5
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      Why are/were you upset? Just message me.......or you could call......