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Stars

Stars guide me through the night.
They gleam and shine bright.
Beauty rests in one glance, as all the stars begin to dance.
As the time passes by, the stars seem to slowly die.
Now they are forced to wait ,
until time passes and the day gets late.
They finally return to light up the night,
and once again make a beautiful sight.

A contest entry

yea... i was extremely bored...

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  • Little Blue Bird
    November 5

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    beautiful

    You may have been bored but this is a beautiful piece of night you have penned here. Thanks for asking me to read your stuff.
    The flow is very good and your rhyming is pretty.