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All the Way Down

I stroke her hair softly
so softly with graceful fingers
and I suck on her upper lip
like it's made of
sugar-coated cherries.

My hands are moving
up and down her back
tingling her spine
as I grab her
and hold her tight.

I start to kiss her tenderly
across the lips and her face
her rosy, pillowy cheeks
the bridge and tip of her tiny nose
the creases beside her eyes
as she smiles for me
the brightest smile.
My lips journey down
towards her neck
and my soft pecks reflect
our moment of sweetness.

Down, and down, and down;
across the nape and
to the base of her neck.
It seems like an endless ride
of slight wetness and hot breath
then I whisper in her ears
in a deep and gentle voice:
"I know you want me badly baby."
I know I am her soulful choice.
She moans "Yes" and
I start kissing
the top of her chest
but suddenly I stop
and play with her hair a bit.

She wants it so bad, so bad
she reaches out and pushes my head
down, and down, and down
to a rest upon dream cloud breasts -
it feels like I'm floating on the sky
laying my head down
under the heat of the sunshine.
I gently grab them
and I begin to massage;
it feels to her
like the hands of God.

I tell her I want her shirt to come off
and her olive green tank-top flies away
then I undo the bra
slip it off and I get lost
inside a new world.

Beautiful like silhouettes of the moon
they lay, hanging onto the skyline.
I caress them with an almost kiss
and I wrap my lips around them
sucking softly and listening
to the sounds of blissful pleasure.

And you know what's going to happen next...

I'll go down, and down, and down
until I'm all the way down.

~AW 11/3/09
   

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S w e e t W a t e r

I got horny SO many times while writing this! haha
This is my first official erotica. (:

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  • insidemjsnotebook
    November 28
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    *giggles* yes this was def a hot one. I LIKE! goodluck.


  • Debra A Baugh gold member
    November 21

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    sweet water.....u got talent......gr8 read.....sensual all the way down, down and down.......take a peek at some of mine.......seduction at its peak......well-penned.......love peace & harmony


  • Not-The-Sun
    November 16
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    oh I was well able to handle this piece, my friend : )

    i liked ; ) and i smiled a lot during it

  • This was so serene and sensual. Beautiful language and imagery, this was very..enjoyable. nice write. good luck in the contest


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    November 4

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    if you like erotica take alook on trough some of my work youll love it, this is the best erotic ive read in a long while flows smootly but i think you should of atleast took her panties of for us very sexy write


  • PurringKitten silver member
    November 4

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    wow

    what a tantalizing flow of pleasure dripping from your pen, found byself holding my breath...thank you kindly for entering...


    • Sweet Water
      November 4
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      Well, I joined your group so I could improve my sensuality & writing skills.
      Looks like there's not much activity, I'll check up on you guys later.


  • FallenGoddess
    November 4
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    !!!

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