Wrapped in all Her glory
in the stars at night,
or in the morning where
the sun shines so bright.
Kneeling and breathing
Her cloak of midnight blue
diamonds dust that sparkles
Her love is so true.
She's our Worldly Mother,
Goddess that holds us all,
it's to Her we offer prayers
as She hears our every call.
Author notes
Prompt: My Mother, the Sun, moon and stars...
Take it where you want...
50 words more or less...
Sorry I went over by eight words,
you can DQ if that is your wish.
A contest entry
- 50 Words or less Prompt by mysticstorm.
450 points, ended November 4, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My poem, do not like it, back space.
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Are we talking about you mother sounds like it to me. Love and luck Ricky
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nice flow of words...it conveys a great image in the readers minds and it show a great imaginary stance in it...
...it was good
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Soft beautiful flow...a very touching write in brevity...your okay with the extra 8 (more or less...
) but thank you for saying so...lovely!
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You did an amazing job with this picture prompt sis. I love the imagery in these lines. The last verse was my favorite. Best of luck in the contest.
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so beautiful,
i love poetry that touches the soul,
and this lovely piece did just that.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
joyce
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Beautiful sentiments and thoughts
It breathes the prompt and, shines deep within the heart
Best wishes hun
Julie
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Beautiful penning Sis
There is such enchantment in this piece..I adore your imagination..your ability in story-telling is brilliant..You spoke volumes here in 50 words or less
Wish you the very best..love & light..sss...David 
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Beautiful, dear friend! I find I really respond to the idea of Night's beauty and its healing for us. Well-done! Lita
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