Thinking about death,
what will it be.
A shot in the head,
or a hang from a tree.
Why do I want to die?
To help stop the pain.
So let it happen,
let my blood drain.
well sort sweet n to da point... i was sad when i wrote it... i wrote it a while ago ..
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I agree with the first post, I cut but would not go so far as a gun... Yet anyway, keep up the good work.
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this is good its amazing nice work
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It's short, sweet, and to the point. It's not a bad write, it's just stereotyping all emos into thinking this way is what kinda makes me disagree with this poem. It's still a very good write, smooth flowing, nice rhyme, and good usage of words. So I will say it's a very good poem, keep up the good work!
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