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I want a love

I'm looking for a Kindergarten love

When you don't know what love is yet but you learn together

The kind of love that is smiled upon by god above

The type of love that lives for the moment and cares not for forever

 

I'm looking for the love that makes me give away my juice box

The same love in work or play in the sand box

Right now a kindergarten love would rock

I want a puppy love as strong as an ox

 

I want a pure love

"If love is a disease lets not find a cure" type love

I want a love where I don't care why I love

A green eggs and ham love where I love you here there and everywhere

I don't have a car but to show I care I'll eat paste for you to show i'm there

 

I want a kindergarten love

Young yet strong

When push comes to shove

My love will protect me like that actress and King Kong

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  • A-Daisy-Among-Roses
    November 4

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    "A green eggs and ham love where I love you here there and everywhere"
    this line is golden, the best best part of your poem. I think your poem could be stronger, but it is still really good.