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Always and Forever

There was a little girl named Rachel
Who had a weak body, but was strong of heart
Was loved by Nelson and Becky
Right from the start.

But that weak body came into play
This past sorrowful Sunday
She gave everbody such an alarm
When she left her Papi's arms

But now she is resting in Jesus' arms,
and will remain in Papi's heart,
Always and Forever

by Alyssa Carnivale

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