There goes my life, flashing before my eyes.
People say in the last moments of your life, that happens.
As I breath my last breath, the sweet, sorrow memories flood my mind.
Flashack take me back to peaceful times.
So much loss over a simple tradgy.
Every momet, every memory, will soon be lost.
For, I only have this one last breath.
Pain slowly seeps in, tormenting my ever so fragile body.
It's almost time now.
I can barely stand it.
I'm ready to let go.
As I breath this one last breath, time slowly stops.
Beat by beat m, my heart beats.
Shocking light fills my eyes.
As I breath my last breath, my longing soul leaves my broken body.
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hmm.. thinking about a car crash.. it was just onthe news.. a young girl and her mother died... sad
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wow
i feel like i know every feeling in this poem. i was in a car crash but lived and with this poem it feels like you captured all the feelings i felt when i thought i was dead. i thought of my crash cuz the doctors said they had to bring me back to life 3 times. everytime i felt as if it was my last breath. s thank you for writing a poem like this cuz i know after my crash i could tell how i felt and there you go you put what i felt into words. thank you so much.
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