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What are the odds of that

Well, It all began on a quiet awesome day,
Rhi, Nate, Ash, Everyone was here, inculding me.

We were celabrateing my birthday at the IceCenter,
Rhi and I were skating together,
Nate and Ahla were playing tage with my brother,
And all was peaceful.

It just so happeneed to a full moon that night,
And when everyone had left exept Rhi and me,
We, decited to kiss.

I was closing in ready for the best,
When...
Something introsting happened.

Right there and then,
I became a werewolf,
Just like that.

"Ah!" Rhi sreamed and then only thing I could think to say was...
"Heh whoa. What are the odds of that."
Rhi was confused and so was I,
She spoke in a low voice.

"Umm Bre-Brre-Brennan ww-wwh-why are you a werewolf?"
"I dont know." I said I a sereous but yet calm voice.
"Ok...soo i guess see you tomorrow?"
"Yeah I guess." i said in a sad voice.
"Besides the obeous why are you sad/" rhi asked,
"Well I can't kiss you when I'm a werewolf."

Rhi ran up to,
Kissed me and ran for the car.
"Thanks!" She waved as the car speed off.

Best weirdest birthday.
Yeah.

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I had this dream last night...yeah.

...yeah...

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 4

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    i loved this and happy brithday im glad you and rhi are sort of an item i like you and she does too and this was a brillaint pen bless ya pal you got my approval shes a little doll and deserves a good lad like yourself so yeah treat her fine cool


    • Mr. Person
      November 5
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      I have to say great thanks for thee's comment but it is not my birthday for this was what i belive would might possible
      be a dream of the future.
      My birthday in on the 25th of febuary, not the day i have writen this poem.
      Thanks again and again fot your comment


  • Rhi
    November 4
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    November 3
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