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Spinning wheel

When i see you down the hall it makes me wanna faint and fall
Knowing that your coming my way it makes me nervous sweat and sway
once i hear that word hello it makes everything seem so slow
i love the way you make me feel you have me spinning like a wheel
when you leave me standing there i cant believe how much i care

A contest entry

even though it says im 19 im 14 so please honestly tell me how you feel i dont care.

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  • XxWillow LeafxX
    November 5
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    sweet & simple

    i love how its simple. the ryhme is amazing... best of luck in the contest. keep writing great stuff like this (: