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Danielle and Thomas


Danielle and Thomas
joined at the hip
soon to be wed
and then what a trip!

Off to Afghanistan
with Unit in common;
gearing up in marriage
with hooting and hollering

Supporting each other in wedded bliss
these two patriots never will miss
one without the other, this never will be;
watch out you rebels, they’re in harmony!

Danielle and Thomas
joined at the hip





Author notes

Ge 2:24 Therefore shall a man leave his father and his mother, and shall cleave unto his wife: and they shall be one flesh.

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  • ea silver member
    November 7

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    This is spunky and seems apropos for the newlyweds embarking on such a (double) mission. Congrats to the happy couple, too.


  • daviscth
    November 6

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    I can't help but laugh as I picture this. Your poem holds amazing imagery and was a delight to read. You don't know this but Danielle is country all the way through so this sounds just like her. Thank's for the entry.