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My Pet Monster (Limerick Chain)

My pet monster is little and green
I discovered him last Halloween
When he knocked at my door
He let out a meak roar
He's the cutest thing I've ever seen

My pet monster lives under the bed
He eats Fruitloops and cheese on white bread
When we go to the park
He makes all the dogs bark
So I put a bag over his head

I take my pet monster to school
All the children think he is so cool
When we play hide-and-seek
There is no need to peak
'Cuz he always hides under my stool



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  • LesbianOfLove silver member
    November 9

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    This poem is cute, completely readable to children. You use rhyme very well. I wish you would have written more actually and made a full story with this. Make sure you keep writing, you're very talented!


  • Little Lesley
    November 4
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    Very funny!


  • Nyafushia gold member
    November 3
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    adorable!

  • refinnej
    November 3

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    Cute! my boy had a huge smile on his face...im reading them to him to see which he likes best. ever think you would be judged by a 3 yr old!

  • Pogo7747
    November 3
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    Funny stuff. Well done.

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