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horror.

 

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she heard a slight tapping on the window in her dazeful slumber,
her fear and loathing dragged her asunder
in the dead and black of the night,
what she saw sure did give her the biggest fright,
her deceased husband
begging and pleading
with his sunken eyes
to be let in.

 

 

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I read a book last night called "The Enchanted World- Tales of Terror" and was inspired to write one of my own, it's not nearly as good, in my opinion.

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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 3
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    Wicked eerie imagery here sweetie..never heard of the book but it sounds haunting..Excellent penning..sss..David


    • Andi.
      November 3
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      thank you darlin
      I tried, but honestly, its not nearly as good as the one in the book, I suck at horror. I really do.
      But thank you for your wonderful comments anyway