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The Stars




My mother is Venus
my father is Mars
the moon is my friend
guide me through the night
unto the break of day

A planetary relationship
in a galaxy of dreams
full of heavenly bodies
that seem void of all life
all amongst the stars




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Prompt: My Mother, the Sun, moon and stars...

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 4

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    Very sofy and creative...I love the closing stanza and how it all comes together as one.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 4

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    I love the way you used Venus and Mars to open this poem and lead us into
    such a beautiful dispay of words
    Wishing you all the best always

    Julie