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Tuesday

I'm a useless wreck
I will never achieve
Never become
Never grow or expect or live
I will never be anything

That would just be to much to ask

oh...

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  • Reborn Phoenix
    November 13

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    Hm thats rather negative... Well if thats how you want it all to work out I'm sure it will. However I'm rather sure you could ahieve most things you want if you will to fight through the years of effort to get there. I think your a little young to give up your dreams. However I suppose thats just my opinion so who cares.

    (btw all poetry lies unless you really have stoped growing... your 19)


    • Living-Out-Loud
      November 26
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      It was just a bad day with the rents screaming till their throats were sore...btw thnx didn't even notice my age.


  • Its-Deja-Vu
    November 4
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    reminds me of a shriveled up pea seed...