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You Will Be Gone

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I will be so lost when you are gone

fifty seven years we have been married

friends before that when we were children

you are one of the first persons I remember

playing hid and seek in the twilight

behind the big trees

gigging for frogs in the pond

trying to sit still in church

you running away first day of school

because some one told you the teacher

would whip you

the growing up years we grew apart

you out grew me, four years mattered

when I was twelve and you were eighteen

you went into the Navy right out of high school

the same time I started

I didn't see you when you came home

then it was three years before you came home again

I was in my senior year

we were drawn to gather like magnets

the first day you was home

I walked out of church and there you stood

I walked right into your arms

now we are in our golden years

your brain had been abused by strokes

three in just over a year

I expect the next one will be the last

Our time is running out

but the going will be as beautiful

as the coming to gather

 

 

 

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We have been married fifty seven years, never seperated out of anger

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  • Morrigan Trinity
    November 16
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    It sounds like an amazing life together. Wow, 57 years. That's a beautiful thing. I can't make a relationship work for 57 minutes. I hope you have many more years together, that another stroke does not take your love from you. Speaking from experience, I know how horrible it is to lose the one you love. Thanks much for sharing and best of luck.


  • catz Moderators member
    November 4

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    This is a beautiful love story, sad yet born of happiness together with the one you love. It's a touching piece. Fortunate are those of us who have had such a wonderful life, filled with love.

    An exquiset piece and I wish you the best in the contest

    Dee


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      November 9
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      You Will Be Gone

      Thank you for reading this poem. I am kind of walking on eggs, we don't make plans, just take it day by day.