Some days are like that...full of sudden beauty ,
Right out of the mist and icy fog of time ,
Shining like a silver star from nowhere ,
A twinkling gray so charming and sublime.
It's frost and fog all frozen all together ,
Just floating in the air so eerily ,
Above our heads a floating frozen wonder,
Gray twinkle, what a wondrous thing to see.
Mists of time may open portals to us ,
Letting out amazing ,lovely things ,
Music written in a crystal moment,
Gold that turns into a fairy ring .
Frost and fog of time, enchanted wonder.
Twinkle gray like castles lost in air.
Encrusted with the beads of winter children ,
Silver, glassy, frosty beads so rare .
Twinkle in the sky ,oh look and wonder,
It's gray and glistening dim,a magic thing,
Ice fog oh bewitching shape of nature,
You foretell the coming of the Spring.
A contest entry
- winter's promise by Moonlightdragon.
1300 points, ended November 17, 12 entries
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Comments
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truly magical words of winter wonderful use of rhyme
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good write
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A most lovely and marvelous poem about the real magic of winter, and done in remarkable meter and excellent rhyme throughout! Just loved it, loved it!!
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