I’m sad - not mad,
she snapped
went off in huff
and threw herself
across someone else’s bed
uses her body for currency
she’s been writing too many
bad cheques of late though…
and the piper wants his pay!
A contest entry
- so real by alaska..
2600 points, ended November 25, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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first I clearly said to put your username in AN.
there was not that many rules and somehow you didn't abide by them.
that really irks me.
I like the beginning of this a lot but, it died out in the end.
I was hoping for something more powerful.
thank you for entering though
and good luck. -
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You are irked? Then my work here is done!
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Very real - and yes, quite a crisis when you can't pay the piper.
Best of luck in the contest, poet.
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