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Untill

One light bent with white
the heater ticketed the light stopped at solid objects with so the reflections.
the once warm,
but cold bitter coffee was nice to the tongue and made my night a little less horrible.
You see this time right now,
its going to be gone
its like gold to me,
i want to experience it fully
and record it in case of forgotten...
like after i smoked pot the world for me
and my perception changed drastically forever...
it was for the better...
but i cant remember the way i use to see faces anymore
Or the way i looked at a ball or a shoe
so im going to record me as a without acid living as well as i can...
until i do LSD which will be shortly

idk comment, tell me whats wrong with it.

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  • michael7519
    November 26
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    yup every ones invited lol


  • tidoubleguher
    November 8
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    amazing. can i come with? great work


  • Andi.
    November 3
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    Nothing wrong with it at all.
    surely not a waste of 2minutes.
    well done, keep up the trippy writes