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Intertwined

a lemon in the sky
i tasted
it's bittersweet
awakens me
yet stings my eyes
i want to dance
i want to sing songs developed in my mind
of what gives meaning to my life
taste the earth on my tongue
feel true and real
your arms loving me now
while you sleep on the other side
i'll catch you in my sleep
knowing you are deep
together with my spirit
and my soul

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  • sgking123
    November 6
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    wow

    this is deep and intense and i loved your intense desire to be held and comforted and give meaning to the life.

    • luv2dream gold member
      November 6
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      thank you for reading and the comments. that intense desire comes easily for me. thank you again!


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 4
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    TOUCHING AND SWEET!!!!

    Life is so beautiful when two can come together in their hearts , their spirits become as one and never part.

    • luv2dream gold member
      November 4
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      thank you for the comments. these words and thoughts came so easily to me!


  • richard dylan
    November 3
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    this is the best poem iv read onthis site all day. i like the way you write

  • Bobby41
    November 3
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    I love the way you use symbolism in your writing.

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