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~Twins~

My personality's reflection,
Staring back at me.
She makes me laugh,
And helps me feel free.
I love our bond,
Our chats so funny.
My dearest twin,
Is ever so lovely.
We kick back, relax,
Enjoying eachother so.
Every side of myself,
I don't hesitate to show.
She is so sweet,
Caring and warm.
Twisted twin sisters,
Out of the norm!


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It is not the greatest poem. Rather simple but I still just wanted to write something dedicated to me special twin!!!! Love You Twin!!!!!

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  • Topnotchsy
    November 5

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    To have a relationship with another person that is this close and this real is a comfort and something to treasure (as you clearly do.) Nice write!!


    Just one minor "error." In this line"

    "Enjoying each other so."

    The words "each" and "other" do not have a space in between them.


    • fallendust
      November 5

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      Yes oh my goodness my twin makes me so happy. I have never had someone that is so similar to me and it is rather enjoyable and I'm thankful for hers and mine relationship! I, of course, appreciate you pointing out my error lol. I will be sure to edit it!!! Thank you so much for reading this one and commenting on it!


  • John Faulkner
    November 3

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    I adore this poem.I can feel the affection you have for her..almost taste it..Your thought expression is exquisite..I love your style..........all of it........truly


    John


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 3

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    HAHA I love this, boy you sure got us down pat! I love the twisted twin sisters thing it's awesome

    • fallendust
      November 3
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      aww shit me twin read me poem!!!! how special am I!!!! Thank you twin for reading and commenting. Ur ooberifically amazing to me!!!!

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