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Pure Energy

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So sensual is pure energy
just floating there through time
Enveloped in her essence
into her form I climb

The sizzle of those fired lips
burning on my drive
Caressing lines of perky soft
with nipples so alive

To nibble that electric lobe
kissing down that neck

Brings to me unbalance
leaving me a wreck

Tasting lightning between her thighs
blistering my tongue
Driving non corporeal
until we both feel young

Dripping now her sparkling dew
down those glowing legs
Writhing as the thunder strikes
with joyful moans and begs

Engulfed in statics flamboyant charge
we reach that flaming peak

Wrapping her legs around my back
and loving my physique

Setting loose sparking seas
that shimmer through the night
Leaving both to swim in space
from dusk til dawn of light

Author notes

credit pic: http://media.photobucket.com/image/seduction/AUBURN_MYSTIQUE/Love_hugs_kisses_hello_miss_friends_TY/seduction.jpg?o=151
Sorry about the colors just having some fun if you can't read it I will change it just thought it'd fit

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  • spiritraven
    November 15
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    Fascinating

    I love the sensuality of this write. A lot of great imagery.


  • Angelic Wolf
    November 4

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    Wow
    This is beautifull
    Good luck in the contest


    • Bosiarbooger gold member
      November 4
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      Thank you

      For reading and commenting it is greatly appreciated, Rick


  • Debbydoes
    November 3
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    electric!

    the colors look great with the picture prompt. A bit hard on the eyes while reading, but very cool neon effect.

    >>Sigh<< lovely poem!


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 3

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    Well I love the color choices, and yes to me it does fit. Honey, I will surf the seas of space if you go there with me. To explore joining as one there would be a real treat for us.

    All my love and lust for you my hubby, my pirate king, my lover, and my best friend.

    Joann

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