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"Revised Moments" (Deprived Memories Inside my Mind)

Revised to the moments of deprived memories inside my mind
I try to remember the thoughts she told me
What can they possibly mean?
I dreamt this all before,
Yet, I am left wondering what could satisfy my anguished heart?
Small town emptiness reversed by the aftermaths of all things grey
The cold air of Autumn sets into my body,
As my will is struck by that same old ball and chain,
What has got me contemplating this all down to the the slightest noise in the background,
Can only describe what is digging inside of my soul!
God must have some sort of plan for me
What can that exactly be?
I am honestly clueless to tell,
But I must rewind this time and go back to the hell I so lately wish to escape!

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  • Sky Princess
    November 5

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    wow, this is really deep. you expressed your feelings fantasticly! you have a way with words this is a great poem, i greatly enjoyed reading it your writing is great!
    LIZ